Reading each other essays was changeling for me.  I don’t really know how to do an essay that well, so I didn’t really know how to comment on others.  I took some from my own essay the WRIT commented on and used that.  I did notice that the word you were used a lot.  I did comment on that.  Also that the page number with the last name wasn’t on a couple of them.  I didn’t have it on mine either but I know I did it, but also my mind was somewhere else this past week.  The others had the four pages or so and I didn’t see that there was a page limit.  I went back through and read everything I could think of and I didn’t find anything.  Some also didn’t have a thesis statement.  I thought I had one but I guess it wasn’t good enough.  Reading others somewhat helped me with mine, what to add, what to take out and how to re-word things.  Essay are not the easiest thing to right, mainly when I went to school I didn’t have to do them.  I tried my best to give feedback on others that I thought were wrong.  Most of everyone’s essay is about clean water that I read.  The harm it does to people who have to go out at night for peace, but have to worry about if the women and children would get raped, taken or just get a sickness from the dirty water.